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LKAJSGSLK lame.

i'm so tired and so worn down
no relief or peace is found
i'm a wreck and all alone
left with no place to call my home

i dont know what to do
i dont know where to go
i've lost my balance
and now i have no home

my heart is torn into pieces
and breathing brings me pain
now i'll lose it all
or go back to being the same

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  • bananasfoster42
    December 28, 2008

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    this is really good. at this moment, i can really relate to this poem. good to read form you =) hope you're doing okay