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Love's Echo

Can you hear a soul breaking
 Like the snapping of a heart

Can you hear a unshed tear
And the pain it still imparts

Can you see a smile fading
In the shadows of the night

Can you see its light diminish
As it disappears from sight

Words are often quickly written
For the stories they must tell

And the sound of love now fading
Like an echo in life's dark well

Please tell me what you think

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  • Cynthia Gaines
    December 28, 2008

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    Beautiful Melancholy...

    This is one sad-hearted poem. Wishing all the best to you. Thank you for sharing your muse's tenderly poignat poem with all of us.
    &
    xx Cyn xx


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 28, 2008
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    John, Your words are always so filled with emotions that fill my own heart as well. The sadness will eventually fade and the beautiful memories will linger forever. You take care. Hugs and smiles to brighten the day. Sandy