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Is It A Dream

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”Now I lay me down to sleep”
“And as your queen I’ll surely reap”

Of the fairies in the forest,
she is not the usual breed
Hunting either man or beast,
whichever suits her needs

An evil spawn of days gone by,
wicked to the bone
Satisfied with nothing yet,
she strives to bear the throne

Laying heed to what she claims,
will give you passage fair
But dare not look her in the eye,
lest you come prepared

A marksmen and a banshee,
she will lure you to your death
Stalking through the day and night,
tracking by your breath

Feared by all the darkest types,
most trophies on her wall
The ground it shakes with an urgency,
when she gives her battle call

Even those who sit in power,
are weary of her evil views
For her to overthrow just one,
would be horrific news

Almost as if she lives a dream,
she does just as she please
One day the forest and its life,
will bow down on their knees



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Art:All_of_Your_Intentions_by_wakkawa atdeviantart.com

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 5

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    I think ergency should be urgency A very neat piece, tightly penned, with an interesting tale. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    Your imagery here is magnificent. I think the pic used goes well with the prompt that was given too.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • God is my reality
    December 26, 2008

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    Woah this is crazy good. The meter gets off a bit, but nothing too drastic. I really like this. It keeps your attention. It's really good and captivating. Excellent imagery. Overall great write!