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You Missed a Spot

You
And me
Together for a while
We talked.
We kissed,
But I was ready for more.
We tried it,
And I think it worked.
As you left,
yousaid that you loved me,
And I said it back,
As I gave you a kiss.
Now, here I sit
At my sister's house,
Watching her clean the floor,
And I say,
"You missed a spot."

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  • Missa
    December 26, 2008
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    Good. Good luck. Thanks for entering