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I love you too

Yeah yeah i love you too,
but i'm not that sure of what to do,
you see this thing thats in my chest,
right underneath my bloodstained vest,
it says i shouldn't trust again,
can't take anymore of that disdain,
been lied to and cheated and then left for dead,
can you even remember that night and what you said?

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  • Inspired By Till
    January 16

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    How sad

    I like this, it is very sad; but it is also very good at the same time. The whole poem itself was so easy to read and understand because all of us{or 99% of us} I believe would feel this same exact way, at least I did.Good Job


  • Antebellum
    January 12

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    I really like this.

    Its sad, but catchy.
    "been lied to and cheated and then left for dead,
    can you even remember that night and what you said?"

    this is my favorite part.