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Dark Knight of the Night

The moon flickers on wet sand
I walk and look across the water
It flickers white and black,
A result of the bright, beautiful moon
A black shape dances before me
I smile and whisper hello
A Morab so high and mighty
My Knight of the black night
And I the black night dancer

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