I tried to taste the sunset
and there was bitterness
in the lines you painted
while our hands had
lingered towards the sky
searching for something
we never found
I spat them on
your face and said
"halleluiah, love has come"
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A contest entry
- I am lost... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 8, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow! this is beautiful, and very heart-felt. i love every line, it's unique and has its own form of grace. keep penning
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wonderful piece..especially liked the lines:
I tried to taste the sunset
and there was bitterness
in the lines you painted
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Humm..you are very wonderful while expressing the truth of the heart..especially the line
"halleluiah, love has come"
made me smile..wonderful work..
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