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The Sun Shines this Day

Vibrant.
Aware of the renewed air,
feeling richly resonant with inner resplendence.
Sun rays pampering my spirit
permeating my skin with relish.
A staining-rendered serenade,
seasonally inclined to bloom
radiant colors, swamping my soul
singing in resounding symphony.
Bathing in bountiful relaxation,
along this beach of serenity
for the sun begins to shine.


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A view of the beauty I see..

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  • Note The Sarcasm
    December 28, 2008

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    I liked this. It seemed very serene and relaxed. Also, good choice of colors to assist your poem with the tone and everything. Great write!


  • Patpowers silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    Beautiful job on this here Kimberlee. Nice expressive words of wisdom on the beauty of the sun. Good luck to you in the contest!!