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Joie de vivre

sounds of laughter
staccato gaiety,
where friends
pour jollity
into the fountain

merriment cascades
across the festivity
like a blessing,
leaving its print
of joie de vivre

 

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  • Tirrell
    January 29

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    A conversational mood, this beautiful poem has me hearing the sounds of a joy filled gathering, the murmering voices of people flowing, and seemingly bubling like a font. A real sense of meriment this gives me. This is a most beautiful poem, My friend may you be blessed! Robert


    • FransB gold member
      January 29
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      Thank you

      I my comment to Aesthete2000 I mentioned when I wrote it. Thanks for the read, and the pointer to this poem I had forgotten that I had written. Amost commented on it myself!! Must be getting old. Frans


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    What a perfect touch of joie!
    This piece sings out, FransB!

    M-C


    • FransB gold member
      January 29
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      Thanks for the comment

      Forgot about this one, and then the surprise I had written it on my birthday! Blessings Frans