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Why it sings, why it weeps, why we wonder...

Shed for the love that died
Shed for the beauty that vanished
Tear.. .one single tear
Oh the beauty of its creation
Oh the sadness it represents
The very beating of the heart of life
Why it sings
Why it weeps
Why we wonder
Shed for all humanity and more
The cry of a soul
One single solitary tear
Borne of the deepest love
Why it sings
Why it weeps
Why we wonder

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  • Stevie.me
    December 30, 2008
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    4.1 out of 5

    5 senses - 3.5 few senses
    Metaphors - 3.5
    Feeling- 4
    Unity-4.5
    flow-5

    average rating -4.1