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It's Just A Game

A figure
surrounded ebonist pools
A dice
starting desultory games
A biscuit
depicting fate - but not unknown
A whitewash
on polished surfaces crashes...

"My mind is like a domino, attracted by what's below
-as instructed-

Frozen - snowflakes on winter grounds
only to be pulled back together
-to start anew-"

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Ice
40-50 words

I just wanted to write something, anything. I won't be doing that for maybe another week or so and I haven't written a word in about a week already. It's so depressing. Anyway, hope this is a start...it's how I feel.

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  • Ryan79
    February 9

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    Cool poem. This one is very interesting. I like the way it creates pictures of the games and the objects in them and brings them to life.


  • Meroza
    February 6
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    This poem here is brilliant,
    The imagry and feelings are
    All so raw, fresh and real!

    Best of luck


  • Rhythm Child
    January 21
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    this was different
    it had a very raw feel to it
    and it was refreshing to read something that felt like that
    really enjoyable poem


  • Rhythm Child
    January 21

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    this was different
    it had a very raw feel to it
    and it was refreshing to read something that felt like that
    really enjoyable poem

  • dx d by me
    January 7

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    I've been there, as recently as last week. Nicely written though. To write something urges the brain forward, to engage in something! BTW, this is better than oh, I just slapped something down! Geo


  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    This is has some amazing imagary which is very powerful. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for entering.
    ♥ Jade


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 27, 2008

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    An inspiration kick-start, for sure. This is a quite different style than what I'm used to seeing from you. It's nice to branch out, though. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Ken-Maverick
    December 27, 2008

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    Like Anna said...
    this is one amazing start to get your inspiration back. Well done

    All the best to you in the contest Alyzeh

    Ken


  • maralisa silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    a brilliant take on the promt your imagery is wonderful and your emotions deep and powerful good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    this is an amazing start to break the ice of you not writing...I amazed by your vocabulary...you are very witty and so gorgoeus.


    Anna Lee

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