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Freedom

To stop those tears falling from his eyes
And his death in the name of something great
To return to a place in time where
A man wept for more than what was his
To give to us more than what he had
For the sake of a prophecy and a God

"Here, Jesus..." I would say and cut his bonds
And free him from that prison
He sought to free me from

"Because I love you too."

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  • echo-ink
    December 30, 2008

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    It would be a wonderful gift, indeed...

    And also...for the sake of all mankind, his life for all of ours.
    and as for "becauseI love you too": this was just wonderful.
    I loved your unselfish giving gift to Jesus.

  • Rambunctious
    December 28, 2008

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    Enchanting...
    If you have faith, then you are as free as that faith allows you to be free.

    SensualD.


  • lanndubree
    December 27, 2008

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    such a sweet poem the unselfishness that was related in this poem was truly magical and breathtaking i so hope to see more from you in the future..


  • Akari
    December 26, 2008

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    It is very very good. I really dont have much to say about this , because im still in conflict about jesus, but it is very well penned. Keep up the Great Work!

    ScarletFox *rose