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Eartha

Eartha Mae, you've gone away:
I trust you're where the angels play
Will souls applaud your smoky tones
Where harps ring out their orisons?

You, who were passionate for peace
Will now have calm that will not cease
Stretched on a cloud of pristine white
You'll make the starry heavens bright.

There is a time, we all must find
To leave this fragile Earth behind
But when my final scene is played
Sing me a purring serenade........

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  • suseann
    December 27, 2008

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    Ah...,I adore this and especially those last two lines. Her essence will light our existance in life and beyond in sweet memories.Thanks for this entry.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    i like this

    very nice rhyming scheme, nice tribute..


  • chills
    December 27, 2008

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    She had principles

    I think. Santa Baby is so lovely though!! I expect she would have rather liked this x

  • Judith Chandler
    December 26, 2008

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    Yes, I never will forget that voice. I like your write, especially "harps ring out their orisons" and "purring serenade"

    A fitting tribute to a one of a kind performer.