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Vampire

Edward has eyes of fire.
His good looks trigger desire.
  Sweet little Bella
  Falls for this fella
Who just happens to be a vampire.


Author notes

AP name: disturbing da peace
fav vampire: Edward and Esme [i luv all the good vamps.]

hm. my try at a limerick. great contest idea! =]
lol, if you read it aloud say 'vampire' with breathlessness.

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  • Anonymous Spark
    January 31

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    aw really cute

    nice rhyming

    from spark


  • Faded Existence
    January 2

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    aww... this is so good! Very sweet, and ah I love it!

    -Faded


  • XUrMyUnLaBeleDx
    December 28, 2008
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    aghh i <3 this poem. Short and sweet... lol. i loveeeeee twilighttt!!


  • MindVSLife
    December 28, 2008
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    Oh my!

    Amazing poem! Gorgeous. I love Twilight!!!

  • frozenblackpetals
    December 27, 2008

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    aaawww!!! that's the cutest thing in the world!! it totally just made my day!!! i adored it!!! yay!


    • Simply.Nora.
      December 27, 2008
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      Thank you so much! {now i feel special.} And hey, your twilight poetry also made my day. Thanks a bunch for the comment!

  • Psyche Of Kandy
    December 27, 2008

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    oh my .. this is a wonderful limerick, I very much enjoyed reading it, thanks for entering it in my contest (:
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