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daddy's darling


the jeweled harlot of all gemstones
a polished ruby can be fully decadent
flashing fire and the warmth of desire
prized for her lasting brilliant beauty

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prompt: ruby

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 12

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    Nice job. I think you have captured the essence of the ruby well, though for red gems I prefer the garnet or spinel.

    Mike

  • Thor-201
    January 5

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    I have a particular fondness for rubies. I love this poetic description of them. Thank you for sharing.