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that i call me....

looking in the mirror, hating what i see,
this discusting thing, that i call me.
fat,gross, horrible, all names the fit well,
stuck in here, my own personal hell.
scars cover every inch, telling secrets i try to hide,
too much hate, i try to keep inside.
avoiding mirrors at any cost, i don't want to see,
this discusting thing, that i call me.


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ap name: Nobodys-girl

im sorry its so short and not really that good

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  • Katie Girl
    June 6

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    i like this poem...it kinda describes me as well...but remember...while you think you're ugly...someone out there thinks you're the most beautiful girl ever!


    • nobodys-girl
      June 7
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      aww thank you
      I'm actually sorry you can relate to this one though....
      haha and i hope so!

  • pelo801
    December 31, 2008

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    i really like the line about scars telling your secrets. good line. maybe next time use the spell check too. and little grammar fix wouldn't hurt, but i think you expressed yourself well, and really showed your vulnerability.