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Hand in hand

Hand in hand

Mouth to mouth

Chest on chest

Down cast eyes

 

Chestised for feeling

Loving

Having

Sex

 

With who we choose

 

In the heat of the moment

The sweetest kiss

The lingering taste

Of

Lipgloss on her lips

 

We live the same

Love the same

Die the same

In the end.

What are your first thoughts.

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  • z0mbiiexXxDawl
    January 12
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    alright

    I think this is a little weak, and yoo could most likely do a lot better. However it's not as bad as I may be makin it sound.