I believe in this world,
In the skies and stars and the sun that will forever shine.
I believe in the power of love,
In the joy and laughter of lovers and children alike.
I believe in Fate and destiny,
In the hope that somewhere out there, someone has written a nice chapter for me.
I believe in the triumph of truth,
In the endless search by others for a complete picture that may be unveiled someday.
I believe in you and me,
In the ceaseless struggle for deconstruction and a creation of forever.
I used to believe in me,
In the gift and power that I have been given, that I should use, but which I fear to have lost.
I believe,
I believed everything.
In a list
A contest entry
- Beautiful minds....please enter. by islekine.
760 points, ended January 11, 27 entries
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Everything? Can you ever believe *everything*?
Comments
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I felt that this could have used more metaphor and the flow could have been better. I did like the simplicity of this piece and how it was hopeful to bitter in such a short amount of time. Good job on this and thanks for entering the contest... Good luck.
Josh
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Very simple, but beautiful and self-affirming. An excellent poem, overall. Thank you for sharing, and goodl uck in the contest.
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I very much enjoyed this piece. I liked the simple language and the repetition of "i believe" and then changing it to "i used to believe" and then finally the way you ended the poem was awesome :]
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Well there is a truth in the statement you have made..the belief itself is the truth of this whole world..and you belong to this world with its truth..well done..
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