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Before

This is the story of before,
before the birth of the sun and moon,
where the stars frolic in a mass party
and exploded into dazzling shards showering
life dust, joy dust, and love dust
all down upon us...


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  • Lady Michaella
    February 20

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    ooo!! this is so beautiful!!! very well done... lovely telling of the creation

    Thanks for entering my contest,
    and best of luck!

    Your judge,
    -Lemon Bee-


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    You have created a wonderful image with this short poem, and I can certainly picture the stars frolicking. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz