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Absolute Terror

Hurts.....
The blows to my head
I see red and keep my mouth shut
Taste the blood from biting my lip
*Dont say a word, it'll make him mad*
Ringing sounds in my ears as my eye
Begins to swell and I hit my back
On the wall

Pain.....
He throws me to the bed and tears my pants down
And I lay still, its no use fighting anymore
*No!*
Scream in my head and whisper it out loud
*BAM*
Right in the face
*shutup you stupid little slut*
Seems like hours, probablly only minutes

Ashamed.....
What did I do wrong
Why does he hate me??
They can see it, they can tell
It must be written all over my face
The blame is mine, I should have fought
Harder and harder, not let it happen

Agony.....
These bruises? Oh I hit a door
The cuts? My cat has a temper
And hates to take bathes
No, Im okay
And no..I dont think tonight you should come over
LEts do homeowrk at your house
Okay?!?

Resignation....
Im home, I mutter and hurry past
He grabs my and pins me against a wall
When I was little he was never this rough
The touching was less harsh, more loving
And his fists more forgiving
Now he kisses me 'til my mouth bruises
And I cry and shake my head
Stopping when the first punch
Knocks my breath away

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  • WednesdayJade
    January 18

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    I really hope you're not still going through this like the way it sounds that you are.
    This is heartbreaking, very sad that anyone has to experience this stuff and I hope you're ok... although it may be a stupid thing to think you would be.
    You've wrote this very well, it's so powerful and emotional, well done =]
    x x x


  • Genesis
    December 26, 2008
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    Jesus Christ...
    Powerful writing.
    Just...wow...

    --Genesis.

  • starving-to-survive
    December 26, 2008

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    Wow! amazing write....i am so sorry you went through this. You have expressed such intense emotions fantasticly. I can really relate to this....my heart goes out to you,.....Thank you for entering my contest