There are many colours in my world
There are the ones I feel
The ones I see and hear
And the ones i know are real
And the ones I know to fear
The colour of my heart is red
The colour of my eyes are blue
The colour of my soul is black
And that's because of you
The colours that I hear
Are similar to what I see
They're more common than the others
But they're still important to me
The colours I know are real
Are the ones I see everyday
The blues, the reds,the greens
Once I see them I know exactly what to say
The colours I come to fear
Are the ones I used to love
The Greys, the blacks, the golds
Even the plain white of a dove
There are many colours in the world
Some I will never see
Some that will fade with time
And some that will stay with me
Author notes
Sorry if it dosnt make any sense what so ever to you it did when i was writing it 
Panic-tiger
A contest entry
- I'm new to AP!!! This is my 1st contest!!! by roninwort.
3000 points, ended January 7, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like the poem, and I like the rhyme but there were one maybe two spots that it was weird for me. I really did enjoy this
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great take on the senses
nice poem and the concept of color is indeed a broad field,
but you did great on this.
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Thank-you for your comment
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Impressive. Not a huge fan of the rhyming, but it worked. It gave it a creepy kind of feel, good job working on the emotion.
Thanks for entering and best of luck!
Write on.
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Thanks for commenting Much appreciated
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Wow again. You are a truely great poet. I like your perspective on this. Colors is a very open ended theme. And you nailed it with your emotions. Well done.
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Thank-you that is so kind of you to say it is the greatest compliment I hope it wasnt too hard to understand/relate to. Thanks again for the comment
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I love it. This is a very moving poem that really does a good job expressing the title. I can totally relate to this poem and i think you did an amazing job with it. Thank you for the entry and good luck!
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Thank-you so much for the comment im glad you liked it Let me know if you make another contest and i might enter
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