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i called you a name

i called you a name
its al the same
im in the shit
im just digging my ditch
deeper and deeper
day by day
we both know its there
but its the one thing we cant say

i dont know how to prove it
i cant as long as he's in the picture
but its not my say
and its not my fiction

a part of me died
the day i let you down
the day your pretty smile turned to a frown
because of me

i just want to tell you
just say what i need to say
three words that will make or break us

but i need you to say them back
then kiss me
i'll take you in my arms
with your hands on my back

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  • Kemical
    January 23

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    needs work homie

    hey bro i like the first stanza allot but the rest does not flow.

    finish and it will be awesomesauce pie

    cheers pet ><


  • niqueindahouse
    December 26, 2008
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    it ends to abruptly