i remember
the way your fingers use to brushed my hair
tucking it behind my ears and the kiss of lips
as they fluttered like butterfly's before landing
finding that perfect spot
i remember
the laughter that bubbled forward from our throats
smiling lips parting willingly as our happiness over flowed
tender touches that didn't stop with skin
but reached down entwining our very souls
i remember
the exacted moment when i fell that first time
your arms waiting to catch me safety
each silent look that passed between us
and the words of love spoken
i remember
moments, memories and untaken photos
all i hold inside my heart "my cherish treasures"
but most of all i remember the way i felt
the miracle that is love and the look in your eyes
Author notes
Picture Credit: __when_you_were_mine___by_sardonyx_wolfess
A contest entry
- All I Want For Christmas...... by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Contest: Love Poetry by Nicole Hanna.
15000 points, ended January 28, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I have to wonder if you read the contest guidelines or saw that I was accepting prewrites on love and therefore blindly entered. You used several of my no-no words, therefore I am removing you from the contest. Thanks for entering, but not what I'm looking for at this time.
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this was a soft read. something that tenderly touched the reader.. I truly enjoyed the emotion in this write, thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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