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俳句 haiku

こっと　静か

風　持ってない　

黙る　死　が

chotto shizuka

kaze mottenai dewa

damaru shi ga

few whispers
winds carry nothing so
silent the death

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  • rhondasail
    December 28, 2008
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    ...feels like the depths of lonely... rich in texture and emotive quality...well composed, Vic, I like it, but it makes me feel somber and hollow Peace, Rhonda


  • DogFish silver member
    December 27, 2008
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    Bone-chilling !


  • Soul Reaper -Crow-
    December 26, 2008

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    lol

    if only I could read that, it falls off the tounge beautifully, please message me with the translation and I'll gladly applaud it just because it sounds great


  • rhondasail
    December 26, 2008

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    ...I'd love to be able to read this....and understand it...may I request a translation please?... Rhonda