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Goddess

A goddess
Always minding her people
Always helping them

Blowing the bubble of the sea
So that sailors find their way;
Blowing the bubble of the winged horse
So that he takes not his rider astray

Blowing a bubble of paradise
So that the marooned can live;
Blowing a bubble of life, hope
So that all creation can rejoice.

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  • Nardiarrrg
    December 27, 2008
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    This one is very good...
    thanks for entering and good luck... =]]