It wakes lovers up
and always shows up at the break of dawn
A welcoming present to the earth ,
As it shows the hint of a ray
Night has now became into day
Light decides to dance through untamed hearts
Promising never to be torn apart
Laughter spreads and hissing stops
The land is rejoicing in the suns glory
All worry is gone and lost
But then dawn then turns into day
and the day turns into night
The sun becomes low
We'll miss our sun
But feel it soon enough
Good night
Sleep tight
Our sun full of light
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Your wording is interesting. I noticed "But THEN dawn THEN turns into day". Just thought I'd point that out ^.^ Good job though. I really like this.
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