Second hand ribbons
Slightly used bows
Wrapped around
Crotchless pantyhose
This naughty little present
Couldn’t fit, beneath the tree
So Santa, put her in my bed
Where she’s waiting for me
A firery Red Head
With a burning bush
So I lept into my bed
Without needing a push
I didn’t unwrap my present
With those ribbons and bows
I just zeroed in my focus
On her crotchless pantyhose
Author notes
Word Count Is 69
Well If You're Going To Go Over The 50 Word, Word Count In An Erotic PoemThen 69 Words Is The Only Appropriate Number Heheh
In a list
A contest entry
- Christmas is over, now let me give you what I truly want to give you. . . . by JinSays.
400 points, ended January 7, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Haha this is wonderful. Very clever/creative
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!
Favorite lines
"This naughty little present
Couldn’t fit, beneath the tree
So Santa, put her in my bed
Where she’s waiting for me"
Amazing
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Tell her to get thigh highs, they are much more comfortable, and leave room for all sorts of devious behaviour
Fiery redheads, hmmmm. . .LOL
Niiiiiice. . .
I never ever count the words, I just put that in there so the higher ups think it's a challenge
Shh, dont tell. .
Love,
jin
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You must put that fire out, it is your duty. Very well done indeed. My best wishes.
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Ha Ha!!
"A fiery Red Head
With a burning bush"
Clever, creative and very well done.
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