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Breathing

Finally able to breath
Finally able to fly
not burden

by worry

that your no longer
going to show up
where your not wanted

I'm getting away

from your murderous glares
your hatred of others
you crasy sadisict

mother of mine

I'm no longer yours
to control
I no longer weep

I'm a soldier

Working my way up
the ranks
not bothered by you

You finally get the hint
your no longer
my mother

I can finally breath.

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