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Child Eyes

Innocently placed,
as a doll on a shelf;
She has no control,
doing as told.

Give her a box of crayons,
Blank paper;
Drawing will keep her busy,
hold her quiet.

Dragons, castles, princes;
limitations unknown;
Lines aren’t the boundaries
that can contain her dreams.

Can’t you see the colors:
Outer space, sunset orange, cotton candy,
Shadow, purple heart;
Painted everywhere she glances.

Careful though: the rainbow can vanish,
black and white prevails
where corruption is evident.
Creation dissolves,
color by numbers is habit.








Author notes

Picture inspired by #5~Colour Me by ~Starfishurricane-http://starfishurricane.deviantart.com/art/Colour-Me-105995256

I love crayons and drawing. I try to draw any spare time I have. I wanted to go in a different direction but I just wrote what came out. I seem to be having a black and white theme.

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  • wakawaka05
    December 25, 2008

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    What a great write. I enjoyed your take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest and in future writing. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
    Caity
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