I want to carry you
Over the water
And into the sky.
I want to whisper
Your name to the wind
And make it
Sacred.
I want to lift you
Higher
Than ever
Soothe you
Heal you
Bring you cheer.
I want to see your smile
And your tears
Your joy
And anger
But never your hurt.
I want to take your heart
In my hands
And hold it gently
While vowing
My love
In your hair.
I want to hold your hand
Hear your laugh
Tattoo every inch of your
Body with
Kisses
Make you mine
Give everything I am only
To you.
I want to carry you
Over the moon
Give you the sky
Every star, constellation
Every planet
Every promise of
Discovery.
I want to take you
Everywhere
Beyond the distance of
Any probe
Any
Ship.
I want to make you happy
The happiest person
In the
World
See your eyes
Your beauty
To see you shine before me
As only
You can.
Like a star
Like a
Dream
For which I may
Carry home.
Author notes
Written for the girl I love, Skye. She only sees me as a friend and this is just...inner feelings I had to get out of myself.
COMMENT!!!!!!!!
Comments
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Thank you for your heartfelt entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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"I want to whisper
Your name to the wind
And make it
Sacred." (brilliant wording and image there)
So beautiful. (nothing less than may be expected, however)
She's a very amazing girl to evoke this kind of emotion and creativity in you. I LOVE the diversion from more normal poetic forms, and it fits your images and meaning well. You certainly got those feelings out! Etched them into the screen where they just jump out and pull you in. Beautiful.
luvs
M
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Wow, sis! This is... AMAZING!!! I, I just love this! It's absolutely incredible. This is one of those poems that completely passes over the brain's capability of interpretation and sinks directly into the heart! It's like my eyes weren't even reading it. It was just flowing from my computer screen, straight into my soul! This is just beautiful! I absolutely adore good love poems like this! Great job sis! Love you!
♥Chelsea
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