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A Broken Promise

So many leaf silhouettes, veined kites,
my dog chasing invisible lofts of air

waves clearly ruptured by pristine
colors. Church bells fondle wooded

steeple chasers, bringing in chorus
behind shrouded heads. Uppity

bitches dressed in clinging ivy
fronds smell of sewer vermin dipped

by wilted Chinese hands. Lower
my head vowing chastity as parched

lips caress a berry flavored shot
glass. I can hear their closet

crying from locked alter doors,
pressed into clairvoyance by winged

prophet demons assailing a truth
within a truth, within a lie. Cold

chills lifted by singing triumphant
chords dangled from breathless

weeping willows. My dog barks
at clear crossing shadows drifting

evanescence sung from silent
children with heads held high.

Praying chants uplifting,
stop the abuse, stop the abuse.
 


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  • Bruised.Roses
    December 27, 2008
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    this is beautiful hit really close to home i'd like to thank you for writing this it's wow.


  • HaleyMary
    December 25, 2008

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    Powerful write, Charley. Lots of imagery in this piece and I liked the part of weeping willows. It seemed metaphorical and symbolic of the pain that the abused can feel in life. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary


    • ckwriter69
      December 26, 2008
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      Thanks Haley for being a loyal reader. Always good to hear from you!!
      Charley