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outside

Missing image
Outside myself

circle of my friends

my family

I will step

and see the

need of others

to find peace

in hunger and fear

stilled.







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Come on 2009 !


Foreclosures and too many homeless here.

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    December 29, 2008
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    very good

    yes it is heartbreaking to see people homeless and hurting.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    oh yes

    so many displaced people, you still have a heart of gold to care and try to protect,i feel the emptiness within this world of turmoil, thank you for this entry and good luck
    VOE


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    how sweet..

    thinking of others pains and wanting to help and make a difference is an admirable trait, i applaud you my friend.


  • arafura gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    Yes, a lovely wish.

    There will be many who suffer in 2009. I hope things turn around sooner rather than later.


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 26, 2008
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    A beautiful wish for others sweetie.

    Very Good....Best wishes in the contest

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