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Empty

I hate feeling empty.
It's the worst thing.
It sets free my sorrows
And makes my heart freeze.
Lead packs my limbs
Cold flames reign inside
They feed on my joy, and when done
Let me fall.

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I wrote this a LONG time ago, in school when I was feeling really lost and alone. I know it's short, but I think it's a pretty good piece all things considered. What do you think?

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    December 26, 2008

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    Definitely a good piece, sis! And I think we've all been here at one point or another, some of us a lot as of late... Very good job with this! I really like it, a lot! Keep writing! Your words inspire me! Love you, sis!

    ♥Chelsea