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Love letter

 
I request nothing but a little smile,
Or a hint that you are satisfied,
With all that I now will give you.
 
And if you hold me in your arms,
For just a little while longer, dear,
I will never doubt my decition.
 
A kiss each morning and night,
As a thank you for being you,
And for letting me into your heart.
 
If you wold grant me a little back,
A nod or a hand so I would know,
I would never leave your side.
 
I would change myself for you,
Learn how to cook and iorn,
So that I could make your dinner.
 
And you don't need to spend any,
I do not fancy diamon rings,
All I want is to know I am yours.
 
So take a little moment and smile,
Or nod my way as I pass you,
Even take my hand and kiss it.
 
                ...And I will never leave your side
 

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Prompt: Win my heart

Did I win your heart?

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  • Ken-Maverick
    December 26, 2008

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    A tender write, this is my friend.
    Well done and all the best to you in the contest

    Ken

    P.s You have my vote, lol


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    A beautiful love letter, sure to win any heart.

    Best wishes in the contest


  • HomeGrown
    December 25, 2008

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    Tenderness mingled with the truth.

    A kiss each morning and night,
    As a thank you for being you,
    And for letting me into your heart.

    It's purity is divine, and it's honesty appreciated. It's a marvelous entry, and I wish you all the best with it.