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Wandering the Spectrum




Green, cerise,
and lemon too

Hints of peach,
lavender blue

Pink flowered
starfruit trees

Apple guava,
vanilla bean

Jacarandas; all the berries,
sweet beloved birds eat.


Heaven is a garden,
where aeolian harps and angels sing

Too, somewhere, his art
Monet is painting.


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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    I agree with the immageries and the concept created here to make understand this world and its assets as well.. a wonderful work uyou did.,.thanks...

  • i eat ipods
    December 26, 2008

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    An innovative piece. The metaphor and the eurika moment at the end. By the time the reader starts praying that it just isn't going to be some list of fruits, the powerful part of the piece kicks.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 26, 2008
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    The "spectrum"---a close friend of Olivia,
    who knows how to turn on the colors!