Green, cerise,
and lemon too
Hints of peach,
lavender blue
Pink flowered
starfruit trees
Apple guava,
vanilla bean
Jacarandas; all the berries,
sweet beloved birds eat.
Heaven is a garden,
where aeolian harps and angels sing
Too, somewhere, his art
Monet is painting.
A contest entry
- I am lost... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 8, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I agree with the immageries and the concept created here to make understand this world and its assets as well.. a wonderful work uyou did.,.thanks...
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An innovative piece. The metaphor and the eurika moment at the end. By the time the reader starts praying that it just isn't going to be some list of fruits, the powerful part of the piece kicks.

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The "spectrum"---a close friend of Olivia,
who knows how to turn on the colors!



