I cut my wrist hoping the pain will go away.
I cut my wrist because people make fun of me.
I cut my wrist because noone likes me.
I cut my wrist because I want the pain to go away.
I cut my wrist but it doesnt work.
I cut my wrist but the pain is still there.
I cut my wrist hoping the pain will go away.
A contest entry
- Addicted to Pain by xXCadyBabbiXx.
900 points, ended January 3, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really like how you used the begenning line as the end.
amazong write. -
I like how you framed the work. Ending with the beginning and all.
Side note+
The pain would never go away if you just cover it up with cuts. The cuts show your pain. People who make fun of you, are the weak ones. Life is a gift. Take care of the gift. Other people are to listen to you. So please, don't cut yourself anymore. -
Thanks for entering!
Wonderful write!
Very good.
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