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Intention

LOOK
pay attention!

LISTEN
please hear me!

You have to understand
This was not my intention
To live a year as a nightmare
And still have my dream

You have to see
That even the strongest break
We can't hold it all
We need some help

LOOK at me
LISTEN to us
We are falling
And it's not our time to die

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