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Fake Happiness

My wish is that
One day i wont need
A fake smile to please
The plastic people
Who control the world
And everyone in it

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  • Rheea gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    They will not cease to exist , you will just grow to know that you can step over them . beautiful poem Congratulations you also took a liitle of my heart.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    wow!! you sure did ask for a miracle in this world I hope your wishes come true plus much more, thank you for this entry, good luck
    voe