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New Development Coming Soon

Palm Beach county
Home of the rich, the beautiful...

FUCK YOU ALL

Your wealth doesnt come
From the money you've got
The house you live in
Or business you bought

Your beauty is not from
Your fake blonde hair
Spray on tan
Plastic surgeon extraordinaire

The wealth is in species,
The beauty in life
Yet you build more each day
Cut through the world with a knife

It takes a visitor to show you
The preserves that are set up
And still you ignore them
bitchy, superficial fuck up!

Open your senses,
Your ears, eyes and nose
Hear the movement around you
Feel the wind on your clothes

Smell the flowers and look close
or you'll miss the tortoise, the geckos
The flowers and armadillos

FUCK YOU ALL WHO DON'T DESERVE IT
GET OUT OF THIS WORLD
GET OFF OF MY PLANET

Because what's besides this,
mother nature's boon?
A sign saying simply
"New development, coming soon"

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got angry seeing all the shit around a beautiful place

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  • starjacket silver member
    January 1, 2009

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    Veryu good piece. You really made it feel emotional and real. Great job with the penning! An A+ job with word usage and everything. Keep up the great work! I will be looking forward to reading and commenting on more of your work soon. i hope that you can get the chance to COMMENT back on my work, seeing as how I am sure that you and I take the same amount of love and put it into each and every piece that we write! Thanks so much for the share and again, a brilliant write!

    THANKS SO MUCH!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Heroesrox~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

  • BHolzner gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    Bravo!

    It takes a special person to listen to our natural habitats. The problem with all of us is that we feel that this is our planet. A planet made just for humans to do whatever it takes to procreate so their are more humans than any o other species. The only species we care about are the ones that feed us such as cows, pigs, hens, etc. The other species are cats and dogs that we think will keep us company.
    It will take special people like yourself to stop the signs that say,"New development, coming soon."
    Bravo!
    Betsy Holzner