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Provocative

how do you raise a child?

shower it with love
and tell it straight truths
morals and all

and when they reach the unsure years
do you insist for those morals to stay firmly planting in that little life?
or do you hold these continuums to yourself
and watch them waste themselves away

taking barely any cloth for "cover"
but its purpose is not to cover, but to continue that tease

provocative

what a life you've let her lead

photos of explicit nature
reveal and revise

desperate?
maybe

but she has nothing left

just a desiring
to be a slut
whore
and various other profanities

even more so,
losing all that decency and so called "purity"
she ever had to begin with

what a shame
was there ever any moral left to give,
to save this oversexed soul

I think it's far too late
but if there was the responsibility from the beginning
the talks
leading to passed on knowledge

maybe things could've changed
maybe

next time (which hopefully there won't be...)
despair:
only if you forget her
and make her self and soul of little importance

if only you take the time,
then time be kind
and will suffice

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