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Future Unclear

Oh GOD I am lost in the colorful taste for life ...unknown
The future is so unclear and uncertain I cannot find my way
Today I am well, but tire easily
Tomorrow I may be useless as can be
How do you get through each day not knowing
One week, one month, one year you may be nothing
I want only life and happiness
I have only hope for a future of pain
Of failing health and loss of memory
Oh GOD please release me from this agony
Give me hope for the life I crave
Give me peace with what I cannot change
Give me strength to go on
Life once taken for granted
Life now missed sorely
Coveted from deep inside my soul
Life marches forward
Never to return to the past
and in the end we all have the same fate




























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  • jackreed3 gold member
    February 22

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    Nice Poem... I have alot of christain poems...
    my christiain book will be out next year...
    JackReed3.... Keep your Faith.. we all need
    someone to talk to spiritally ... and it seems you
    are the most spirital person I know on this sight..
    Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3... we are all
    sinners Jesus saves thats why every night I Pray.

    • thank you for such a wonderful comment i have other inspirational poetry on my page every day i celebrate you is my fav although a little long for some a special write for me because i truely feel the write


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    yes..as far as the fate is concerned it is true that the route is the same ..and the destination is the same..even than the results of life may differ in terms of the fruits of the acts..thanks for the entry..