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Magical Swirls

with each breath she brewed new worlds that grew
magical swirls of bubbles she blew
a feast of colour just quite enough
but onwards and upward
they went with a puff
some forgotten
but some they will not
never lost
down the vortex
spinning
overhead floating
winning on high
surveying the scenes
gives lifes hopes to dreams
shiny companions
bubbly spheres
wafting
wishes
clearly
sinc
er
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Author notes

This one of my favorite images and I love bubbles

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  • penman gold member
    February 20
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.

  • Nice imagery and ryhmes, makes me want to go blow bubbles I also like it how it looks like the text if wafting up like the bubbles do. Well done!


  • funpum
    January 1

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    If you read this out it is very bubbly (especially at the beginning with all the explosive consonents) and wafty (especially at the end).


  • Nardiarrrg
    December 27, 2008
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    I love it...
    thanks for entering and good luck.,... =]]


  • penman gold member
    December 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well expressed. So very well written. Best of luck in the contest.

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