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To New Sunrises

A year when dreams
become a city
to dwell,
love becomes more plentiful
than guns.

Where hearts,
reach out
more than clutch.

A contest entry

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  • Lady Michaella
    February 11

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    WOW!! this is a stunner!! fantastic work here.. really great poem and written very well. you have imense tallent my friend.. great job.. i love this so much..

    another brilliant write.. i love it.. i love all your poems. that beautiful bronze trophie is very well deserved.. great work one again! (AGAIN TIMES TEN ZILLION TRILLION MILLION! EG( 10 00000 0000000000000000000000000 00000000 0))

    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • StarEyes
    December 26, 2008

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    I like bubs! What a wonderful wish this is! Now if we can find a way to make this happen, then this world may have a chance! Great job!

    Congrats on the Bronze!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    oh I like this one

    so true the way this old world is going, violence is the thing of the future, thank you for thisentry in a truthful poem, good luck
    VOE


  • LAPoe gold member
    December 25, 2008
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    May that day arise soon!

    laurie