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Wings

My one wish: wings,
if not on me, then a steed,
to ride on the wind
like Bellerophontes on Pegasus -
like Daedalus -

to freedom.

Author notes

My first poem at allpoetry.com. As you might be able to tell, I enjoy Greek mythology. Please tell me what you think. Exactly 24 words.

A contest entry

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  • Loves HER Master
    December 28, 2008

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    Very well done. I love your use of words and your knowledge of mythology. Great work!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    I See

    I enjoyed this piece..myths are nice, as reality is part of it in whole, thank you for this entry, good luck
    voe

  • epleen
    December 25, 2008

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    You certianly are well versed in mythology. It was nice to see a tangible wish verses some of the more abstract concepts. I hope you do well in the competition and get your winged steed.