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Yours Came True, So Should Mine

I wish that you would take me back
Just so I can tell you no
That I'm gone
Forever and ever
You had your chance

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    lol

    if wishes like that could come true, its a waste of good effort in a lost cause, love this wish , keep thinking of more than what coulda been...lol good luck and thank you for this entry
    VOE

  • jodygirl
    December 25, 2008
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    You Go Girl ! ! ! Give him what for any way you can.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • mrocun
    December 25, 2008
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    Sad but a beauty


  • DesolatELifE
    December 25, 2008
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    p.s 'you're' is short for 'you are'.. Maybe the last line isn't meant to say that.


  • DesolatELifE
    December 25, 2008
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    I like that a lot.

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