I have wanted to talk for a long time.
I just don't know how.
How do you talk to a Diety...
An all-knowing Creator of life
And all its beauty therein.
Well God,
I think I should learn.
Sincerity is all it should take
so
I'll keep it simple and short.
God...I'm lost!
i can't find my way in life.
I feel chained to my past
And want a better life.
Does such a thing exist?
Author notes
Oh God ! I am lost in the colourful tastes of life...Unknown
unfinished
A contest entry
- I am lost... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 8, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What bauaty do you see daily?
Comments
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I beleive it exists..and the words of your querries here are obviously very natural..your honesty sparks in the lines of beautiful expressions of the poetry..well done..
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What beauty do I see daily?...a new day, new opportunity, another shot at kickin in the doors of life...your poem is exactly what the one line states: sincere...heartfelt and unabashedly simple-the very best sort of conversations are just so...Well done. Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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i love this piece great job it so true and passoniate poem great job i love this alot amazing write keep it up keep on gping stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day
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