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Lost in Loveliness

Oh God!
Once lost amidst the darkness
searching blindly through this
maze of life...and then came You...
transforming the darkness to Light...
and now...I wander through
days and nights...lost in the
colorful tastes of life.
Vibrancy beyond belief...
hope and joy now within reach...
and I
stand in awe of the loveliness
You offer to me...stand in awe that
it was there for me all along...
and I'm forever thankful
for Your pallette of color...
the strokes of Your masterful brush
painting life into a beautiful
masterpiece for me.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    You are very true and very wise while describing the colours blessed by the God to nourish the mankind..very much well taken poetry..thanks..and goodluck


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    wonderful

    Alovely picture you paint here lady, very nice imagery to boot! keep doing your thing my poetic powerhouse!