I feel the word
I’m so scared to admit
But it’s easier for me
To give up… I’ll quit
I need you around
And I want you to be there
I need you to tell me
That you really care
For that is something
I’ve never had
No matter how broken
Or shattered and sad
Although a small amount
Of time has gone by
I feel like I lost you
And honestly don’t know why?
I need to fix this
But I don’t know what went wrong
I just know I can’t deal
With the things going on
I want to be there
Catch you when you fall
Like no one else
I’ll be there when you call
No matter what time
I promise I’m around
No matter the problem
I can always be found
When you feel some pain
I’ll cry the tears you do
For all the pain you feel,
I feel it all times two
I want to take the risk
Won’t you take it with me?
Please let me try and help
I’ll try to help you see
You’re worth my every tear
And yet you’re worth so much more
I love everything about you
Please don’t walk out the door.
i think i love you
Author notes
basically, long story short... my bf was breaking up with me becuas ei had alot of emotion shit going on. so i rote this to try to fix thing.
we broke up
but now we're practically together, its just not 'official'
and honest i dunno if i can be f*cked with any of it any more
mehhh
guys r shit
next person i fall for, better be a chik
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
I loved the poem, but at the same time I love your authors note because I'm so about to that point and i thought the:
guys r shit
next person i fall dor, better be a chick
was perfect
-
You're a really good poet... well done
-
amazing
completely amazing................. -
awesome!
this is amazing! Its amazing the way u put the words together. -
Great Write !
I hope it all works out ok for you
Well penned 
Love you 
xxx
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
