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True Innocence

Do you remember the days,
When you were just a child,
When rainbows and puppies,
Were the reasons you smiled?

When laughter always happened
Over the slightest little things
A chocolate bar or 10 cents found
Is what would make you grin.

Then came along your first real crush
The boy you claimed to ‘love’
He took your heart and soul away
And helped you rise above!

The innocence there was special
And yet so far lost away
Though never have I let it go
In my heart will always stay

Its memories like these
That makes you wonder why
But shows happiness cannot be bought
Yet keeps us flying high…

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]]I MISS THE OLD DAYS!![[

Author notes

just got thinking one night (story of my life really, lol), and i came up with this... tell me what u think tho

luv HB
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  • Wow...this is soooooooo good Wouldn't it be nice to go back to those good old days, when we were just carefree kids and the simple things made us happy.
    I really, really enjoyed this poem. It rhymes and flows perfectly...AWESOME

  • This is beautiful.. I miss the old days too, my carefree childhood...
    I especially loved the first stanza.

  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    Excellent !

    I too look back to the days when I was a child and the 'simple' things did make us happy. At the time tho, I guess we didn't truly appreciate them. Wouldn't it be great if life were that simple now
    Very well penned...I enjoyed the read ... xxx


  • starving4perfection
    December 25, 2008
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    awww this is good...short and sweet =) well done x