Where are you Daddy?

WHERE ARE YOU DADDY?

Hey daddy, I'm right here -
Can't you see me?

Hey daddy, I'm talking to you -
Can't you hear me?

Hey daddy, I need a hug -
Can't you hug me?

Let's play catch daddy.
Teach me to fish.
Help me build a birdhouse.
Listen to my wish.

Daddy, daddy, where are you?
I can see you standing there -
What's the matter daddy?
Don't you even care?

I need you daddy -
Don't you love me?

Never mind daddy.

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This is the poem I read everynight to my baby daughter, who is now 1 year old.

I hope you like it!

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ytilauD
July 4
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Kinda sad... But good!
xxlisajazminexx
December 25, 2008
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i find this to be sad
it hurt me at the end when the child says
"nevermind daddy"